I see the little sugar town glittering in the sun
like the queen's crown on a hot summer's day.
The tiny candy people prance in the tall grass like pukekos having the time of their lives in the hot summer breeze.
All of the candy people are eating
mini ice creams that look like the queen's jewels gleaming in the sun.
The little sugar school kids are chattering
like millions of cicadas
playing their loud song in the cold wind.
If you look very closely
you can see the queen of sugar town
sitting on her throne saying
“Get out of my sight right this very instance!”
Telling off the peasants,
as if they were her puppies
And they have just dug a big hole in her garden.
Why is the artwork colorful?
What inspired her to make this?
Was it hard to make?
We are using metaphors and similes but I'm struggling to use them in the right place in my writing but I think that it sounds pretty good so I think I'm at multistructural now.